文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home, I was so curious that I began to play it with my friends. Form then on I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves. In order to improve our skills, we compete in football games sometimes. One of the football stars whom I love is Beckham. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills. My dream is to become a professional football player in the future.