七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at six o\\\'clock yesterday. After hading breakfast, he went to park by bicycle and enjoy himself in the park. He had luch in the MCdonald\\\'s at the noon with his parents.Then he went home and had a rest. He was playing basketball with his classmate from 4 o\\\'clock until 6 o\\\'clock. After hading dinner, sam went for a walk with his father . His father bught a classical CD for him, What a interesting day.