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How to Protect Our Eyes We spend more time on equipments which caused our eyes are hurted. Protecting our eyes is very important. Firstly, we have to keep our gerture correcting and 50mm distanct between eyes and screen. we should see the view far from here after working one hour. Don\\\'t staring at the screen for a long time. Secondly, do some excises for our eyes. The last, we often have a look at the green plant.