文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I picked up a football on my way home, I was so curious that I began to play it with my friends. Form then on, I often play football with my classmates every day. We often train ourselves. In order to improve our skills, we compete in football games sometimes. One of the football stars whom I love is Beckham. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills. Football has become part of my life, so my dream is to become a professional football player in the future.