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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
dear George: I am glad to receive to you letter, and very exciting that you can come to my hometown. now, let's introduce the household hotel. the signal room, which is thirty yuan every day, and the double room, is twenty yuan, no matter which kind of room, the table money is twenty yuan every day.you can eat lunch with the head of household, there is menu,which you can order what you want to eat. meanwhile, you also do the cook by yourself. in this atmosphere, you can feel the home atmosphere and the friendly of Chinese people, and known the china closely. on the other hand, you can enjoy the swimming in the sea, climbing,the green house working which don't pay for. I hope you can enjoy you traveling.
