七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6:00am yesterday. He went to the part by bike, and had fun in the park. He had lunch in Mcdonald's with his parents. Sam played basketball with his classsmates in school from 4:00pm to 6:00pm. Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner, and his father bought an classical music CD to him.Sam had a so fun day!