作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;采用了一些简单的从句。
Dear editor; as the development of society,the quality of people's life is progressing, more and more human have owned their personal car. but there are different views in the our classmates. some student think that the car is a transportation, which can take convenience and comfortable. the car is a symbol, it can reflect the progress of living conditions and the strong of country. not only the car can take the benefit for person but also can take the development others business. however, others hold he view that cars can lead to some secure problem. it can take some gas to pollution the air, which is more and seriously. too much cars lead to more accident.and the problem of parking is more and more highlight.