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人教新目标七年级英语下册 Unit 12单元 测试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:28浏览次数:4859
要求:
阅读下列规章,然后写一篇短文来介绍Tom’s rules。
Tom’s rules
1. Get up at 6:00.
2. Go to school at 6:15.
3. Don’t eat outside.
4. Don’t listen to music on school days.
5. Don’t watch TV on school nights.
6. Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.
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文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中从句数量过少;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Tom has many rules.He gets up at six o'clock on shool days and goes to school at a quarter of six o'clock.He doesn't eat outside,because he think the outside foods aren't health.He doesn't listen to music on school days and doesn't watch TV on school nights.He is back home by twelve o'clock in the morning and by twenty past nine in the evening.these are very good rule.We should study to Tom.

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