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Tom has many rules.He gets up at six o'clock on shool days and goes to school at a quarter of six o'clock.He doesn't eat outside,because he think the outside foods aren't health.He doesn't listen to music on school days and doesn't watch TV on school nights.He is back home by twelve o'clock in the morning and by twenty past nine in the evening.these are very good rule.We should study to Tom.