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There is a object that I want to describe,book. Book just like a container, it contains everything about the world. It has different types. We can see animals, botanies, and all of the place in the world. It has different languages, we can learn any languages on it. It is our teacher. It teachs us how to speak, how to learn, how to become a person. It is our best friends. It accompanys us all the time, when we are in bad mood, it calm us down; when we are arrogant, it tells us that we still endeavor to learn more knowledge. It is just make up by paper, but it like towering trees, growed hundreds of thousands of days. We use it everyday and it easy to carry. Book, will make us the most colorful life. It's a treasury, containing numerous sources that we can harness.
