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If my foreign friend is going to visit China, I absolutely will take him to my hometown FuJian province. FuJian province is a beutiful city in China which has thousands of trees, moutains, rivers and so on. So these things make the air of FuJian province more flesh than other provinces. And there are countless interestingplace in FuJian province. Like WuYi moutains, JiuLi river, TuLou etc. I would like to introduce the WuYi moutain to my friend. Because there are thoustands of trees cover on WuYi moutains. It is all green and has fleshest air. So this place is a most confortable to live for human kind. There are countless visitors go to there for having a rest after woking hard every day. I think my friend absolutly will like here.
