初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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My favorite movies Hello,boys and girls!My name is lois.I come from Deyan.I like to see the movies.And,my favorite movies are Bring happiness home,it let me very happy .I like this movies ,just like Bring happiness home,and Tai jiong . I like another movies ,like The first love this little thing it let me cry.but i like it very much.It very intresting.