初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

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I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. I know how to type, how to copy a file, and hom to visit a web site on the interner.One day ,mom was not at home. I turned on the computer and began to learn hom to chat on net. The first one I met there was a boy called tom. He greeted me politeluy. When he knew ther I was ony a 9-year-old girl, and almost knew nothing about chatting on net, he started showing me how to use the chatting tools, hom to download, and hom to send e-mails. I learnt a lot from him.