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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误。
At present, the internet is used all of the world, then it is now the most popular to communicate with each other. This way is very most convenient and quick. Earlier young people are fond of communicate on the way , now more and more people accept this way. Whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact? My answer is no, because Face-to-face contact could real feel with talker who body movements and expression.
可可英语 - 划词释义
