七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. And then he went to park by bike. He had a good time. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's. Sam played basketball with his classmate in the school from 4 o'clock till 6 o'clock in the afternoon. Sam went for a walk with his father after supper. His father bought a CD for him. What a interesting day!