2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'd like to introduce my home city Liaoyang,It is a history city for hundreds of years.We will wander out the city and you will enjoy your travel.If you have some interesting ,I will come to the lava spring bathe in winter and that will be comfortable for streching your body.