2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

从句数量偏少；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

On recent times,there are some phenomean appears in the society.Excessive packaing,particularly some festivals,such as,Mid-autmn in send gifts to relations and acquintance or some others. They lost so many and so much sources and money and human power.We should advocate economic ways to live.There are not much resources for us to abuse.And we can find some evidences that younger people and teengages take expensive goods and split them away for grant. At least ,we should come together to build a healty and rising enviorment for us and even our generations.