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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
My hometown is winter now.It was windy and cold.So people are wearing coats and scarves.I like winter very much.Because I love snow very much.So every winter,I wear warm clothing and hats to make snowman with my friend.I feel very happy. The winter.The people often have lunch or dinner in restaurants.Others play in the park.They are good ways to relax.I like going to park by bike with my friends.We always have a good time. How fun the season is.
