文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Tom is a good boy.He has many rules to keep him having good habits. Every day,he has to get up at 6:00.Then,he goes to school at 6:15.It's late so that he doesn't eat outside.And outside's foods is also not clean. He likes listening to music.On school days.He never listens to music.He doesn't watch TV on school nights,either.He has these rules help him to heathy and good.So he always get good scores.And the teachers and students all like him. In the end,he is coming back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.He never stays outside late. What a good boy!