上下文衔接稍显不流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
hi,dear students: Today i will have a word with my dear classmates.Because i find out some students losing they self-confetable with ther are english.In order to they can fall in love with english and improve ther are english. It's important for our to study english.First,we able to be interest in english,also,we can know the english lituerature and history.Second,we must realize english is usual and comment.More and more kindman take about something use english.At the end,we will not make good progress if we reject study english. So we will study english as well as i have same suggest.such as we should read english book, news paple and so on.Not only we can reading but also we can listen to english music ,singing the english songs.Of cause,we will do some english work.it can increas our skill for english. We can impress our english goal.so you will try your best .