高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is football.one day,I picked up a football on my way home by chance,when I back home,I played fooball with my companiers,it was so interesting that I fall in love with it. from that time,I often play football with my classmates,we usually had trainning and sometimes will had a match. my favorite football star is Beckham,and my aim is to be a profeesional football player.