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假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。
信的要点如下：
上午：学校活动
下午：游览市区晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；把握下长难句在文中的分布；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
dear Andy Smith: I am very exciting that you can live in my house, and I represent my home family to welcome to you. now, let me tell you something about the arrange of activity. in the morning, there are some activities, such as playing basketball or visiting the school .and in the afternoon, we will visit the beautiful city, which is very an old city.I think you will fond of the city. when we have a dinner, we will play some games, charting,or watching. i hope you will enjoy all this day. I am looking forward your coming.
