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Hellow,every one!I'm LiHanYu. The foreign friends welcome to NanJing! First of all,NanJing is located southeastern of China ,and is the provincial capital of JiangSu Province.A population of about five hundreds millions. Besides, Nanjing has 2400 years of history,and was the capital of ten dynasties in the past. What's more, NanJing is especially beautiful and there are many places of interest.Such as the Xuanwu Lake, Jiming temple, Stone City, etc.The beautiful scenery in there. It also has many modern factories and tall buildings.
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