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The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
文中词汇表达较准确，学术词汇表达灵活；复杂句采用很棒；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
As the table indicates that the greatest population was found in Caucasion,about 60000 which accounted for 68% in the area of Atlantis city in 1988,and the rate of growth slower than before,about 59% in 1998 and about 47% in 2008,ten years later,while,from the perspective of the total amount,it has been increased to 65000 in 1998 and has been increased to 72000 in 2008.While,the percentage of S.E.Asian has been taken up 12% and the total amount was 11000 in 1988,comparatively small,and there had a move to increase year by year,16% in 1998 and 23% in 2008,accordingly,the amount increasing by 7000 in 1998 and 24000 in 2008 compared with 1988. the other two countries,the smallest percentage population of Altantis CIty is the Indian from 1988 to 2008.Collected 2% in both 1988 and 1998,but the total population has been increased from 2000 to 2500.And in 2008,allocated 6% in the area of Altantis City and the amount was 8500.Then,the last country,Polynesian,growing sharply from 16000 to 25000 in the first decade, the rate grown by 5% from 18%.While,in 2008,the rate has been increased steadily only 1% according to 23% in 1998,and the amount has been increased by 12000 compared with ten years ago. The table overall illustrates the significant changes in the population of Altantis City over two decades from the profile of different ethnics.
