2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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one day a baby was lose his parents ,and was crying loudly .i and my friend was go through there and saw this .we are very worried that baby.so we quickly come up him .and talking with the baby .why are you lose you parents and should we help you to find you parents?he was stopping crying and told any thing to us .so we find he parents telephong and speaking finally the baby was finding his parents and being happily . this ting showed us anyone needed helps .i think if anyone showed his helps .the world would be more great !