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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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dear jack, how are you? it is hubing.i participated in NEWYORK FLAIR from DEC 15 to DEC 22 and i am interested in your product which article no is 5670. i would like to know more specifices of this product and pls send me price list and instruction. looking forward to establish business relationship with you best regards hubing
