1. 描述事情经过;
2. 谈谈你的感想。
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Last saturday,i was waitting on bus stop.a middle-aged woman came to me and asked me how to get to LEGOU supermarket.because i am very familiar with the supermarket.so i can quickly tell her the ways to get there,she was very happy and expressed her gratitude to me. actually,for me,i also enjoy helping others ,because helping others is a pleasure for me.