七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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sam got up 6:00am yesterday.After that,he rode bike went to park and he played very happy.noom he had lauch with his prents in McDonald's.Afternoom he play basketball with his friends in the school.They play basketball until 6:00pm.After dearty,sam go for a walk with his father,and his father bought a music CD. What a intersting days!