七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句使用过少；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误；结构不严谨，行文不流畅；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

sam got up 6:00am yesterday.After that,he rode a bike went to park and he played very happy.noom he had lauch with his prents in McDonald's.Afternoom he play basketball with his friends in the school.They play basketball until 6:00pm.After dearty,sam go for a walk with his father,and his father bought a music CD. What a interesting days!