丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达不够丰富,学术词汇方面要多累积;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Dear George, Thanks for your mail and have a nice day. Welcome you come to china to spend your summer holiday. In your mail you ask me about the household hotel,it's very populor in China now,you will live with chinese family and can know chinese more easily,the detail price as follow,please find it: price for single room: 30 yuan/day price for double room: 20yuan/day/person price for food: 20yuan/day/person About the food,you can choose you like,and also you can do some cook if you like.