七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam got up at 6 clock yesterday and then he went to park by bike.He was very happy in the park. In the noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon, Sam played the basketball with his schoolmate from 4:00PM till 6:00PM. After dinner , Sam went for a walk with his father who bought a CD give it to him. What is a intersting day for Sam!