七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句数量偏少，应增加文中从句和复合句的使用；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Yesterday.Sam got up at 6 o'clock,Then he cycled to the park,he had a fun in the park.He ate at Mcdonald's with his parents,In the afternoon,Sam played the blanketball with his friends from 4:30pm to 6:00pm,After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father,his father bought a claascial CD for him.What a funny day that Sam had.