雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:资金与财富 Money and Finance

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As the table represented that the trendency of the oil price from 1995 to 2014 and the prediction to 2015.From 1995 to 2000,there has gone through two phase:raising steadily until 1998,with the 25 based on 20 in 1995,while fell to under 20.And from 2000 to 2007,it has been raised markedly from the low base of 15 nearly in 2000,which has been increased to 50 approximately.Compared with the second period,the third period,from 2007 to 2010,keeping the pace of increasing oil price,and the rate of growth has been increased sharply.Collected from 2010 to 2014,the oil price still sustain its move to increase,while it has been increased more steadily than the thied period.Specific data was:from 120 to 130.Under the prediction of experts,the oil price in 2015 will be placed in the liner of the third period. Overall,the significant changes in oil price is one profile of the supply and demand in the resource over 2 decades.