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文章学术词汇表达灵活，但拼写错误稍多；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
When human-beings has been gone through the industrial revolution,the fierce comprtition has been come into being,the advanced modern device has been invented and penetrated into our daily life.Consequentely,the multi-function and intellective machine has been a substition of human-beings in diversity fields,thereby creating the spiritual stress for us,particurlarly for the students.Before rendering the impacts on the individual students,I will analyze the possible causes of this stress. Because of the limitation of the job opportunity and the over suply of the graduated students,it is inervitable for students especialy the college students,who must take consideration of their future,with uncertainty risk.Adding a heavy burdon is not the students option,but an inescapable fact of life,and we need to constantly adopt to keep pace with it.Besides,from the perspective of the social value.Appareantly,the industrial innovation has been fueled the appetite for the wealth and status.Undoubtedly,the students are vulnerable to the atmosphere of pursuiting the wealth and power.Consequently,they neglect the significant of relieving stress and sacrifacing themselves into the fighting for competitors. As a result,it is conceivable that the students have to suffer from the stress from both physically and mentally.For example,the student who choose the challenging but rich revards spcialty,like finance,requiring theem use brain frequently which are in atate of stress without the relaxation.Some of them are died from the diseases refered to the brain in the later days.Besides,the youth delinquency could become a normal phenomenon if we could not treat the stress marble or guide their value orientation in a modest way
