雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:国际事件 International Events

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Recently,it has been sparked hot discussion on the benefits and drawbacks brought by the hosting of the international sporting like the Olympic Games.Many countries compete for the rights to host these international games in an effort to enhance its sound of voice in the international affairs.Overall,it is the international sporting that brige the harmony among the participants in the name of competition.While,not only the merits the international sporting have brought,but also the drawbacks have generated. Before rendering the disadvantage come into being,I will analyze the benifits first.Apparently,the international sporting is the material bond that ensure the consolidarity of the whole human-being spieces and the continuity of the spiritual of transcent ourselves.We have witnessed the processing of breaking the records battle and battle in the tripple jump in the Olympic Games.Besides,from the perspective of the host country,these grand activities attract variety of people all over the world,that means,the sporting could fuel the growth of the local economy. However,it is inevitable to raise the concern between the chosen country and others losered the election,thereby creating the antagonistic attitude toward each other.Morover,it is a waste of nation's fiscal which should be harnessed in the practical domain such as the scientific development.On top of that, the inhabitats may create a distortion thoughts that they are superior to the foreigners. After weighing the merits and drawbacks,we can safely come to the conclusion that though we could not eliminate the negative feelings and must allocate the proportion of fiscal expenditure,the potential benefit should not neglect from the human-beings species to the host country‘s prosperity.