但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累;连词使用偏少。
tom is school boy, every day, he gets up at 6:00 .he goes to school at 6:15. he does not eat out.he likes listenning to music on school days. he often watches TV on school nights. he always goes back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.