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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请注意分段。
Here in Guangzhou. It's summer now. The weather is hot and wet. It's often sunny and windy. People wear T-shirts and shorts. The hot weather and bright sunshine makes us feel uncomfortable. But we could drink cold drink and eat ice-cream. They are not healthy but very delicious! By the way, it is important for us to take an umbrella when we are out because the weather can be sunny in the morning and rainy in the afternoon!
