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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；简单句偏多了；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。
hubin@163.com KPOHsales@hotmail.com During the exibition which is organised in New York in December 15th,I have known about the the product number 5670 new products were very interested.You should send a price list and instruction to us.We are pleased to establish business relationship with your company.Thanks for your cooperation with us. Hu Bin
