文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Memo Date:December 23rd,2008 Due to I will go for trip for a week and not to talk about the things concernig Yuandan holding a party .I will recall Mary Chen required to write amemo according to the information given in Chinese below.Remember to write your composition on the Translation/Composition Sheet.It's the time for us to prepare the meeting for . .It is up to you to do sth. decide on