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Memo From:Li Ming To:Mary Chen Re:New Year's Party Dear Mary Chen, You should talk about the New Year's Party with staff these days,and I will be in Beijing for a week.All the things are up to you.You informed the staff the final time and location for deciding on the schedule.In advance the prepation .