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International tourism is becoming increasingly popular, and people from all over the world flock to visit famous places such as the Great Wall of China and the Sistine Chapel in the Vatican. However, this influx of visitors has caused many problems for the preservation and protection of these places. This essay will discuss the causes of this damage, and suggest some ways it can be reduced. Damage to famous places can be due to many different causes. For example, the paintings in the Sistine chapel are being damaged by people breathing on them when they visit. Their breath contains moisture, which raises the humidity of the atmosphere and consequently damages the paintings. Damage in other places such as the Great Wall is because of tourists climbing on delicate areas, and other factors such as road building so that visitors can access the site. These activities can cause erosion and damage to the area. There are various solutions to these problems. The first one is to limit tourist numbers, because fewer visitors will result in less damage. Another solution is to enforce strict rules about which areas people can visit and what they can do when they get there. For example, special paths can be built and people can be forbidden to walk off the paths. Visitors to inside places can be asked to wear masks to reduce humidity. In conclusion, it is necessary to control or limit tourism at famous places, because if we do not do this, these places will disappear and future generations will lose the opportunity to see these great wonders.
