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I thought I can put up with her bad temper so as to creat a warm atmosphere. Unfortunately,I was just proved to be wrong. What is worse,the relationship between was worse-off,which is out of my expertation.At the moment,I am at puzzled about what to do next.Should I give up or persist in?I am tired of the life I am experiencing.