小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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I want to be a excellent teacher When I grow up . Teacher is a great and hard career. If I want be a good teacher , I need to have rich knowledge, and wisdom. and I need to read much books . in my opinion, the work of teacher is very hard .Teacher need to teach lessons every day and then check the homework of students at night .sometimes they need to handle some complex between students .So teacher need to have the ability for the accident. on the other hand, teacher need to have a lot of interestings .for example, sport ,music ,draw so on . in general , To be a teacher is my dream.