小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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I want to be a excellent teacher When I grow up . Teacher is a great and hard career. If I want be a good teacher , I need to have rich knowledge, and wisdom. and I need to read much books . in my opinion, the work of teacher is very hard .Teacher need to attend class each day and then check assignments of students at night .sometimes they need to handle the order of activity, some contradition between students need to solve. Teachers need to have the ability for the accident.on the other hand, Teachers need to have a variety of hobbies.for example, sport ,music ,draw so on . in general , To be a teacher is my dream.