2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(33):sticks and stones may break our bones

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This reminds me of one of similiar experience of mine.There was a time when I argued with my mother over some trifles,which my mother forced me to clean my room.I was unwilling to obey her word and said that it was none of her business.Hearing of this,she was angry and begin to yell at me.So I talked back,what made things worse,I added that I hated her most in the world,which was really hurt her.Without saying anything,my mother went out.J ust at that time,I saw her tears rolling,which made me realised that it seem as if I made a mistake.I shuold have never talk to my mother,who is the one I value most inthe world.