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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments. One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply. Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.
