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Pollution is one of the serious environmental problems in China, especially in Peking. Car emissions and industrial waste gas resulted in the pollution. Everyone lives in the city without blue sky, clean water and fresh air, even the temperature of the earth is rising. Almost everyone has a private car and maybe they think that family members should have a car so that they will have a wonderful life than some people who ride bikes or go out by public transportation. But is that real? The only thing you have is a burden but definitely not a comfortable life. Waiting for a long time in the small car and smelling the air with petroleum during the rush hour. That’s not a good thing. Many reports said that chemical factories near river pouring waste water into river without doing anything to it all the time. As a result, the fish in them are dying out because of the polluted water． However, we all know of the problem of pollution, but do we really know the pollution? In a word, only can we do is start from ourselves. By the way, ask yourself "if not now, when? if not me, who?"
