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Dear editor, I am a fresh senior 1 student and I am seeking help from you because I have some difficulties in dealing with the relationship with my best friend.We were separated and reached such a position where I were afraid that we can't be good friends any more.It is for sure that distance gets in the way of our communication.So I really need your help! Yours.