七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam get up at 6 clock yesterday.And then go to park by bike,he had a good time in the park.Noon he has lunch with his parents into McDonald’s.Sam and his classmates in the afternoon paly basketball in school ,From playing until at six o 'clock in the afternoon at four o 'clock in the afternoon.Take a walk after dinner, Sam and his father , his father bought him a piece of classical music CD this day Sam had how interesting