七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文中从句数量过少；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday.Then he went to the park by bike.He had a good time in the park. At noon he and his parents had lunch in the McDonald's. He played basketball with his friends in the school from 4 pm. till 6 pm. in the afternoon. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father, and his father bought a classical CD for him. How interesting this day!