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Sam got up at six yesterday.Then he went to the park by bicycle.He had a good time in the park.He had lunch in the McDonald's with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmate in the school.After supper,His father bought a classical music CD for him.What a happy day Sam had.